Old 09-19-2006, 10:55 AM   #1
Question YOUR POETRY!!!!!!!!

I've been reading a whole lot of poems on here and the quality is just amazing.... so I was wondering...


What exactly do you plan on doing with your poetry????

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i saw this now...so I'll anser whille i have time not tryna jump da gun an be da first lol...buh seriousness i jus write my shit for therapy...lol...i mean when i get down an im strugglin through some shit...im like people likin dis shit so i can make some money offa dis...but da way i see it if i start makin money off dis like to conciously do it for moeny lol..den its a waste of why i started in da first place...its jus a way to clear up my focus...keep da past in da past...i mean if i touch someone and someone learns something...lilek a new way to get through da same thing den dats all i need...but outsida dat no grand plans...

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i love the way you think LS...... Your poems are amazing and I am pretty sure they touch others because they get to me too.... I am happy that poetry is a passion and a form of therapy for you..... u seem like the kind to not let money get to u... glad for that... i wish you all the success out there and good luck with all ur endeavors......
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actually i never saw myself as serious writer...since i havent been writing as long as a lot of the others..my first set of poems was to get thru a bad phase...but the others are mostly just a thought...that will flow anyway it wants to except for about maybe 5 which took a little more thinking....and i dont plan to do anything with them...as i said im just finding my style so i have more to learn...
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so when you find your style do u think u will publish ur work or nething of the sort
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not really, because i have bad writing habits that im not sure i want to change.....i mean im lazy .i like to write quickly and i dont like to edit....so thats very unprofessional for anything serious to come from it..lol...plus this is a new hobby and and i'd like to keep it a hobby...
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I really have no plans for mine - I look at poetry as snapshots of moments in my life....sometimes i reread them, and even though my poems usually have seeds in my life, but blossom in my imagination, usually i can put myself into the frame of mind that I was in when i wrote them.....for me its an escape, a steam valve for emotions that i cant release in real life. Besides, im way to self conscious to ever publish these!
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even in ur post u seem poetic....... das good....^^^^^


blue i love ur poetry.... yall some good poets on here.... no lie
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If u consider my poems good, den respect.....I dont plan on doin nothin, i make musik....all my shit, is from songs, or jus thoughts i write as i get on...so, guess dats your answer
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Originally Posted by AveryGyrl View Post
I've been reading a whole lot of poems on here and the quality is just amazing.... so I was wondering...


What exactly do you plan on doing with your poetry????
I want to be a spoken word poet
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is this for all the people who are posting poems?
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WELL FOR ME I WANNA BECOME A DANCEHALL ARTIST!!! BUT THATS GONNA BE HARD BUT IMMA TRY MY BEST TO GET THERE
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