[silence]

havent wrote in a while...maybe i lost my style
maybe i was happy at one point and lost my smile
that could be...I'm just tryna write....frustration at losing the key
tryna set my mind free....so close to opening the door...
but a solid brick wall ave me reminiscin to times when i was pounding the floor
pavement...tings in my brain is so simple even a cave man...
geico can save you money
so can i...aint dat funny...food shortage...im still not hungry
clouds are gone...sky's blue...but it's night...so it's still not sunny
maybe i fell asleep cause a couple hours alter it was lookin kinda dusky
smile on my face...guess it's why dey don trust me....cant seem to put it together
guess im a little rusty.....

the main event...explaining whats relevant...love one another
search for peace among friends...save one another forget about heaven sent
i said this was all relevant
to humanity...oh the calamity...oh the insanity...
stop it
heard it too many times...i can't argue with a child drop it
keep focused...stay on topic...don't make our existence tragic
our you'll get violated by a two by four...till you feel like a fagot...oh dats graphic
but dats life...fools say its insane cause dey never paid attention till it hit dere front door
realisin dat we're headin towards a depression and finally realisin dat
not even da money saved with geico could stop it...so like i said...don be a fool
take your mind out of school pay attention...
read the novel its graphic....i don say get desensitized
but don act surprise....like its da firs time you realize...life is tragic
stop it
to humanity...oh the calamity...oh the insanity...
i said this was all relevant
search for peace among friends...save one another forget about heaven sent
the main event...explaining whats relevant...love one another

guess im a little rusty.....
smile on my face...guess its why dey don trust me....cant seem to put it together
maybe i fell asleep cause a couple hours alter it was lookin kinda dusky
clouds are gone...sky's blue...but it's night...so it's still not sunny
so can i...aint dat funny...food shortage...im still not hungry
geico can save you money
pavement...tings in my brain is so simple even a cave man...
but a solid brick wall ave me reminiscin to times when i was pounding the floor
tryna set my mind free....so close to opening the door...
that could be...I'm just tryna write....frustration at losing the key
maybe i was happy at one piont and lost my smile
havent wrote in a while...maybe i lost my style

[Mz K]

no you didn't loose your style :-p

[BlueSerenity]

lol..not at all...the playing and weaving of words always peaks interest and is something ive always admired about your writings and always makes me smile because it shows how your mind works...

first and last paragraph...foward and backward...still the feeling is that the last one came first...at least to me...glad to see u writing...dont be a stranger