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03-02-2009, 06:26 AM
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sometimes in life....
arite i meant to do a lot since i got back but never really got da time to sit down an collect...here's something that i hopes an everybody thing...because its like life's reached a point for everyone that they've become introspective...maybe its my impression but you know we all reach a point sometimes in life...and we think and the thought process isn't that dissimilar just our actions and our honesty with it but too much with the phylosophising enjoy the poem for what it is
sometimes in life... there are times in life when you say you love there are times in life when you you say like and there are times when when you say aiite lets do dis me mr you miss me more than you like to say that was a long encounter okay explanation needed hol on little distract - ed my little baby's teeth -ed beggin to be feed - ed back to the story sometimes in life you become a husband and you get a wife and you you say there's gotta be more maybe not(s) unless you're right and you can sit in the union because of necessity or obligation or you can leave because you spite hush little baby.... arite but sometimes in life we make mistakes we're wrong accidents happen and sometimes in life its arite to be the bad guy get in a fight defend what you love an cherish because even in darkness your future's bright don worry baby when you grow up you gon say dese grown ups dey like look at life and don't see it right do things because they're selfish and out of spite an little one this is a love story without tradition or boundaries because we got msn, myspace, facebook...even skype an if we make it out we soldiers...we strong not luck...cause we're arite This was a letter to my unborn child about my future life and what it might be like sometimes in life...we're just like mediocre average...just aiite and sometimes we dream and we get what we like to all those future husbands and future wives you feelin me right...it could be like this but you know...sometimes in life... i am dead tired right now so i had to edit a couple typos...not every typos a typo though...
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03-02-2009, 09:53 AM |
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hmmm first off true true words...secondly...i love how you played with some of ur short sentences...if u read it normally and pause its one thing but if u let it roll into the other u can get another angle...shows you creativity...as ive said of you so many times before..you are a gifted man and i always look foward to reading your work...
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03-16-2009, 12:35 PM |
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shana miss...you up in here writing yourself too lol...what'd killa call it your softside...miss lexi...you new but glad to see you participating and appreciatign the poetry...anybody who can enjoy poetry is good in my books
and miss blue...lol...you had to point it out for them lol...wonder how many other people caught it and i mean in the other ones as well...always respeck |
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03-16-2009, 01:06 PM |
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Originally Posted by silence
good to see u around luv...plz keep them coming..its always a pleasure..
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