[Monte]

The feeling is back,
the one i never seem to lack,
whenever I think i lost it in my maze,
it shows its presence,
i'm amazed.
Eyes looking down,
face painted with a happy frown,
lips pouted,
angry words are never spoken,
ears are hot,
bloodshot red,
i never find the reason,
tis is the season,
for this feeling,
society, maybe i blame you,
but rather to dismiss it,
maybe work on it,
get rid of it,
i now have a shoulder to lean on,
but i rather to push it away,
dont wanna bleed,
phobia is its name,
though i'm hanging on to this,
it is the season,
for the feeling without reason,
the ground looks more attractive every time,
no, i wont whine,
i rather to dine,
with a open mind,
yet, the other half is closed,
peeking through my thoughts,
trying not to be seen,
i laugh so whole-heartedly,
just so the lights are not revealed,
they'll never know that it is my season,
to feel the feeling without a reason.



Monte

[GhostStar]

bravo..

[Monte]

thanks dear

[Shana B]

i think iw ant my own season too
great as usual

[Monte]

......thanks

[KreyoL LaDii]

[GhostStar]

Originally Posted by Shana B

i think iw ant my own season too
great as usual

shana sweety... u'd need a whole year

[BlueSerenity]

u know again i had to read twice to get the real feel of it...lol..and for this one i get conflict...like a battle...maybe between the mind and the heart...or maybe between past and future...or hope and fear...or a little of all..lol..but confict nevertheless....good job

[Shana B]

Originally Posted by GhostStar

shana sweety... u'd need a whole year

it'd still be mine...time is not te issue

[Shana B]

Originally Posted by BlueSerenity

u know again i had to read twice to get the real feel of it...lol..and for this one i get conflict...like a battle...maybe between the mind and the heart...or maybe between past and future...or hope and fear...or a little of all..lol..but confict nevertheless....good job

definitely with you on the hope an fear thing blue

[Monte]

Originally Posted by BlueSerenity

u know again i had to read twice to get the real feel of it...lol..and for this one i get conflict...like a battle...maybe between the mind and the heart...or maybe between past and future...or hope and fear...or a little of all..lol..but confict nevertheless....good job

omg bluey no matter how twisted my poems are...u always get them ...fi real....like my mind is so crazy when im writing...i try to hide the meaning of things beneath the words and so forth...and u always get it.....

[BlueSerenity]

...well im sorry im not trying to put u out there or anything....
i just always go for the feel more so than the words by themselves tho...then i put myself in ur place and try to think what i would be feeling if i was writing those words...its just a habit when i read ppls poetry...but next time ill just say good job monte..

[Monte]

Originally Posted by BlueSerenity

...well im sorry im not trying to put u out there or anything....
i just always go for the feel more so than the words by themselves tho...then i put myself in ur place and try to think what i would be feeling if i was writing those words...its just a habit when i read ppls poetry...but next time ill just say good job monte..

no no no....i like that u do that....i really do.....u better not jus put good job monte.... ....i luv the input...

[Monte]

Originally Posted by KreyoL LaDii

thanks loli

[Monte]

Originally Posted by GhostStar

shana sweety... u'd need a whole year

ur a mess