Old 03-28-2009, 01:53 PM   #1
...A Kiss...

I was looking him dead in the eye,
trying to feel the seaon of his soul,
a strong wind blew,
trying to interupt my captivation,
I kept my gaze,
long and direct,
still searching to find my reason,
this sacred place draws me,
a warm sensation overpowers me,
a rush of heat ran through my veins,
i became aware of my attraction,
without losing focus,
i moved in closer,
trying to satisfy my curiousity,
i went in deeper by a magnetic pull,
i couldn't help myself,
i took the risk and let him invite me
to his sacred place,
his world,
so welcoming,
he showed me his locations,
his desired destination,
an organ that was inspired by me,
a reflection of myself was shone through his eyes,
a drip of water came running on my face,
i had no idea if it was rain,
or my tears defeating me,
my eyes began to get clouded,
with my tears,
i fear the thought of losing my sight,
In a moment like this,
he felt my fright,
the fear of being pushed out of this place,
gave more permission to my tears,
my sight was regained, though i never once blinked,
my tears came pouring down,
but i was still in, deep.
I felt a stroke of sadness,
trying to demanding attention,
it wasn't mine though,
my tears were of joy,
his new found fear of losing his world
made its presence,
i touched him with my heart,
that sent a message to his soul,
I felt another warm sensation,
i wonder if summer is here,
but with the feel of his heart,
i know that i got rid or his fear,
I looked him dead in the eye,
and never once doubted,
that he is my four seasons,
in his soul,
i found my reason,
we stared so profoundly,
and so in-depth,
we leaned in closer,
and fed each other with a passionate kiss.


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