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: 07-03-2009, 12:28 PM
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call this one thinking outloud

im black and im proud
say it with me...im black and im proud
now that i got movement in the crowd
lets reverse it
****...curse it
yes like dat...i been thinkin why black gotta be so hard
but im not black but a man a human benig seeing
the world through the eyes of a child
many pains and anguishes make me smile
met my future wives sent them on to future lives
or is it they left me
lets seee
don't know ones hard to admit the other
is hard to comprehend...wait a minute
or is it wait...oh damn...thought i was gonna say a second
as my feet are fine...im back on my grind
remmember that line...was in a poem one time
or was it a poem one time
when my feet were fine...what am i lookking forward to what am i leaving behind...this time
is a rhyme for black children blessed with black skills
then those in power use black skin to make the world limit thme
**** curse it..reverse it...doesn't all make sense
if i had more time or if i was more patient i would do away with all the pretense but life's a bitch not a woman or a lady
and its making me pay rent
crazy
what i just said to those it was meant
didnt' make a dent
must be my accent...to what comes next...flex time...to have....
yess you get it..so let it slide...spread it wide...
im black and im proud...
im done lol....jus needed to relax the brain...blessings and good wishes
good food on your favourite dishses....on your favourite plates...blessings from the time i was missing...shit not a tiger...but damn i feel great..but wait...this parts about you...so best in all that you do...and pray to who you pray to and s(he)'ll see you through...shit i aint better dan me so i cant be better dan you...so we riseeee....say it with...im black and im proud...yu been a beautiful crowd


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u have a knack for taking one thought and expanding or switching it around in your poetry...same coin seeing both sides...good to see u still writing...miss reading you..so keep them coming...take care care babes...
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