I miss the way she smell

antigentlemen · 07-29-2009, 12:25 PM

I miss the way she smell...

I love the fact that she went all natural, always ready to feed me till my belly is full...

but see right now I'm starving cuz I ain't been eatin right, it only taste good when she makes it...

Feelin like I don’t tell her I love u enough or I miss u enough or I need u, cuz I do need her...

cuz on sum real G shit she's always been the one I run to but I haven't ran to her in so long...

yearning for her to call my name and then I pretend like I didn't hear just so I could hear her call me again...

and so at first when she call me I creep to her, and then I walk, and then I run...

and her arms are always wide open to hold me or maybe stop me cuz I run so damn fast but all I'm saying is it's been wayyy too long since I've seen her and I can't forget the way she smells cuz it's like a never ending sweet aroma lingering on every size 3x t-shirt in my closet...

and I'll never forget how much she's worth but I do take her for granted sometimes cuz she's always like be careful out there baby...

and it gets annoying cuz I get paranoid when I'm leavin da crib with my brother just to go to a club to dance and drink and have fun and.....not think about her.....damn.....

so I woke up this morning right, and I thought to myself, when was the last time I told her I love her, I need her...or thank you...thank you for introducing me to the music I love...the Dennis, Beres, Peter Tosh, the Redemtion Song...

thank you for carrying me for 9 months, shit I ain't even been in a relationship that long...

but before I leave this Earth to go wherever I'm goin whether it be heaven or hell...

I just wanna let my moms know that I miss the way she smell

*My Heart is Pure*

Monte · Monte

wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood

antigentlemen · antigentlemen

Originally Posted by ♥Monte

wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood

Thanks Monte

BlueSerenity · BlueSerenity

hey...didnt know u wrote luv...nice..very heartfelt...hope she was the first one to read it...keep them coming...

07-29-2009, 12:25 PM	#1
I miss the way she smell I miss the way she smell... I love the fact that she went all natural, always ready to feed me till my belly is full... but see right now I'm starving cuz I ain't been eatin right, it only taste good when she makes it... Feelin like I don’t tell her I love u enough or I miss u enough or I need u, cuz I do need her... cuz on sum real G shit she's always been the one I run to but I haven't ran to her in so long... yearning for her to call my name and then I pretend like I didn't hear just so I could hear her call me again... and so at first when she call me I creep to her, and then I walk, and then I run... and her arms are always wide open to hold me or maybe stop me cuz I run so damn fast but all I'm saying is it's been wayyy too long since I've seen her and I can't forget the way she smells cuz it's like a never ending sweet aroma lingering on every size 3x t-shirt in my closet... and I'll never forget how much she's worth but I do take her for granted sometimes cuz she's always like be careful out there baby... and it gets annoying cuz I get paranoid when I'm leavin da crib with my brother just to go to a club to dance and drink and have fun and.....not think about her.....damn..... so I woke up this morning right, and I thought to myself, when was the last time I told her I love her, I need her...or thank you...thank you for introducing me to the music I love...the Dennis, Beres, Peter Tosh, the Redemtion Song... thank you for carrying me for 9 months, shit I ain't even been in a relationship that long... but before I leave this Earth to go wherever I'm goin whether it be heaven or hell... I just wanna let my moms know that I miss the way she smell My Heart is Pure __________________	About Poster By: antigentlemen Join Date: Jul 2004 Networking Rating: None Add To Favorite Share Views: 231

antigentlemen	post #3 08-02-2009, 10:27 PM
Dhaz Immigrant Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Crown Heights, BK Street Cred : 3 Posts: 1,113 Dhaz Dollarz: 500 Gifts: 4	Originally Posted by ♥Monte wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood Thanks Monte

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Monte	post #2 07-31-2009, 10:28 PM
Caramel Flava ChiC Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: check yah mirror Street Cred : 17 Posts: 36,149 Dhaz Dollarz: 500 Gifts: 55	wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood

BlueSerenity	post #4 08-03-2009, 09:48 AM
Lyrical Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Dhaz Street Cred : 22 Posts: 19,477 Dhaz Dollarz: 500 Gifts: 72	hey...didnt know u wrote luv...nice..very heartfelt...hope she was the first one to read it...keep them coming...