Old 07-29-2009, 12:25 PM   #1
I miss the way she smell

I miss the way she smell...

I love the fact that she went all natural, always ready to feed me till my belly is full...

but see right now I'm starving cuz I ain't been eatin right, it only taste good when she makes it...

Feelin like I don’t tell her I love u enough or I miss u enough or I need u, cuz I do need her...

cuz on sum real G shit she's always been the one I run to but I haven't ran to her in so long...

yearning for her to call my name and then I pretend like I didn't hear just so I could hear her call me again...

and so at first when she call me I creep to her, and then I walk, and then I run...

and her arms are always wide open to hold me or maybe stop me cuz I run so damn fast but all I'm saying is it's been wayyy too long since I've seen her and I can't forget the way she smells cuz it's like a never ending sweet aroma lingering on every size 3x t-shirt in my closet...

and I'll never forget how much she's worth but I do take her for granted sometimes cuz she's always like be careful out there baby...

and it gets annoying cuz I get paranoid when I'm leavin da crib with my brother just to go to a club to dance and drink and have fun and.....not think about her.....damn.....

so I woke up this morning right, and I thought to myself, when was the last time I told her I love her, I need her...or thank you...thank you for introducing me to the music I love...the Dennis, Beres, Peter Tosh, the Redemtion Song...

thank you for carrying me for 9 months, shit I ain't even been in a relationship that long...

but before I leave this Earth to go wherever I'm goin whether it be heaven or hell...

I just wanna let my moms know that I miss the way she smell


*My Heart is Pure*

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wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood
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Originally Posted by ♥Monte View Post
wow....ok at till the few lines at the end i wud thought u were talking about your girl lol....good twist....i liked it alot...even tho u throw in some creep walk run...i guess i just went over it....but yea really goooood
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hey...didnt know u wrote luv...nice..very heartfelt...hope she was the first one to read it...keep them coming...
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