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: 10-23-2009, 06:03 PM
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I can feel it the feeling i feel when i am i think i can this close i am the end is in sight the end of my plight i feel it dimming it being my light from me its draining yet with all my might i'm trying not let die - my fight i'm almost there enter stage left - my greatest fear failure is nigh already shiverin with anticipation cant let the dream die within spittin distance
wishing all i felt was nothing but positive vibrations
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writing without thinking...just feeling...short...funny thing is the first time i read it i went towards the acknowledgement and then the positive outlook...but i read it again and there is that tangible fear like the poem says...a lot packed into the sentence...
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