[silence]

I don't know how this is gonna turn out
I'm jus gonna type
ever been in a mood where you just cant get right
knowing it's not your emoitions
but its someone else's plight
you get a moment of reprieve an you feel arite
then it starts back up...bubbles like the soda water in sprite
problems dissapear...we arent meant for each other
i am not your type
my life is progressing and i should be arite
life has never been so clear...there should be no
fight
thinking it was my own emotions i looked deep
then the shadows jumped out...sike
i've been waiting this whole time to say that
not just because it rhymes alright
but because this must be a joke...played by life
unknown feelings came over me...almost crippled
no sight
i took a break browsed some other sites
now im back to this poem...cause i gotta finish it tonight
can't sleep can't wake...till i do
and i gotta see the light
but i'm not lying to myself...so
shouldn't i be quite alright
i accepted all the negative so
the outcome should be oh so strite
i mean straight...might
i get into vague detail assess the weight and the height
of what i'm carrying and see if i'm right
i can't lose what isn't mine...
i accepted that as fine...
so why is the same thread
still playing in my mind...
okay lets start from the beginning go over this one more time
love is like a lock and a key
i've learned
to let go when the other side lets go
and i did...but the emotions that i have
contradict what i know...so this is the reason why
i write this flow
so you ready to move...so you ask why don't they let go
see thats where i think i got it wrong...and i don't
know what i know
acceptance of the facts that is how we grow
assess my past...last time a lady told me to go
i went
and what do you no
it wasn't the truth but it was a fact..so
how does that relate
unlike the first the facts are in sight
so i've accepted that the actions are right
which speak louder than words...so why the emotions
that tingle and feel like a fight
they don't come from within
they cover my skin...
like they gonna drown me and i gotta write a will
to my next of kin...
there i go again getting distracted...enough with the sites
arite....
what was the answer...i don even know
the character played by life blowing the winds of strange
still sending shivers...indignantly i close my window...well i never
would have expected this predicament
when everyone was agreed...
what was necessary was being done...
there is a grain to work with there if thought was a seed
it'd probably grow into that thing i need
to make lemonade

[Shana B]

....i don't even know where to begin with this one

[BlueSerenity]

as i said before and probably too many times, every time i read you im amazed at your gift...your story telling style of poetry seem to just flow effortlessly and your ability to place a weighted thought so casually within your rhymes is a testament to that gift...anyway...once again it was a pleasure reading you....couple of thoughts jumped out at me the first time i read it....in the first one im quoting the verse but the thought that is just beautiful is the last line since it is a concept that can be applied to so many things in life...the second one is just beautiful poetry right there...lol

and i don't
know what i know
acceptance of the facts that is how we grow
assess my past...last time a lady told me to go
i went
and what do you no
it wasn't the truth but it was a fact..

there is a grain to work with there if thought was a seed
it'd probably grow into that thing i need
to make lemonade